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Imagine by ~toria-doc:icontoria-doc:

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Imagine for a moment
That you were the only one;
The only one in the whole
World without a hand to hold;
Imagine three billion
Pairs of people, and you’re the
Six billion and first, the
Last one born, the odd one out.

Imagine for a moment
You live in this lonely world;
Everyone else can smile–
They have a love and can be loved
Themselves– while you, longingly,
Watch the one you dreamt could be
Yours– but no– you are alone;
You know it wasn’t to be.

Imagine for a moment
That you are forced to see ‘them’
Live, love, have a family,
All while knowing that you will die
Alone, unnoticed, full of
Bitterness at the world which
Denied you happiness and
Made your life a mockery.
©2008-2009 ~toria-doc
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*porpierita Oct 7, 2008, 2:55:53 AM
Holy macaroni with cheese on top!

Wow...you really DO have a knack of writing emotive stuff, don't you?

Lovely as usual! :glomp:

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~toria-doc Oct 7, 2008, 7:18:39 AM
:giggle: Thank you very much! :D Thank you for the compliments! :hug:

Oooh can I have that holy macaroni with cheese on top please? :D I like macaroni cheese! :P
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*porpierita Oct 7, 2008, 8:30:15 AM
STOP, you're making me hungry! *runs away before is tempted*

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~toria-doc Oct 7, 2008, 8:40:35 AM
Haha! :laughing: Come back!! :giggle:
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*porpierita Oct 8, 2008, 2:43:59 AM
Awww...I'm hungry again. My goodness, I'm ALWAYS hungry. I eat so much, yet I'm still so...un-large. Must be genetics.

We never learn lots about genetics at school! Like you know, the mix between parents and children, etc. We always learn stupid biology like respiration and stuff. BLAH!

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~toria-doc Oct 8, 2008, 8:26:39 AM
Lol, you'll get onto it, especailly if you're doing Triple Science. There's a whole section devoted to genetics. But obviously not in so much detail to understand each different gene haha!

Be patient, you'll get there with it! I did it in my second year of the GCSEs it will come up in your syllabus!
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*porpierita Oct 9, 2008, 1:31:03 AM
OOOOOH! AWESOME!!!!

Hehe, we have the courses, it's just not in the current course that I'm doing or something...like they have it we're just not learning it :(

Boohoo!

Do you take IB or A levels after GCSE in your school?

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~toria-doc Oct 9, 2008, 7:30:33 AM
:nod: A Levels. I'm enjoying Physics A2 (the 2nd year of A Levels), Chemistry AS, Ethics and Philosophy AS and Maths Mechanics AS. :nod:
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*porpierita Oct 9, 2008, 7:40:12 AM
Ah...we do IB here. We used to do A levels, but changed ;)

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